Oh how cute, this one was so thoughtful and well done, dear. this great piece really deserve a 5/5 because it is so nicely done

keep it up dear.

Aww. i want a puppy. it was so cute. i loved it. great work 5/5

It was cute and rare coz i haven't read a poem dedicated to a pet..how sweet but it was still simple and i don't get the message of your poem. keep it up 4/5

Puppies are great lol. This was sweet and really cute. Wonderful senryu! 5/5

marcella

It was a good poem m'dear. Very cute =)

I really like the 1st line xD

Keep up the good work!

Hahaha..i love it! simple and straight to the point..i love how animals (or..people for that matter) can find amusement in such simple things..great job!

Aww your puppy is so cute. *pets Bandits cute little head* It's great that you wrote a poem for him.A very great poem.5/5.
--Miranda

Aww it was cute, i liked it, great job. good write.

How adorable. There's only so much that can be said poetically about a senyru due to it's length, or lack of, but I think you used the form well. All the aspects and qualities of senyru which I won't go into detail about because I know you know, were there. Also, the subject was heart warming. I could picture the playful scene. It really did make me go "aww." Keep writing!!

Very unique and creative poem reflecting your versatility. Well done

tc
Fsams 5.5

Puppies barking at the strangest things.. it's so adorable! I love how animals will freak out over something odd, especially puppies and kitties... Another simple poem but very good non the less.

5/5 <3

~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

This was cute. I loved it.
well done
love Tara-Kay
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