What can I say
you are such an awesome writer
well done
its may be cos Love isnt my theme
or most probably because i am lovong what you write
inspiring me also to write a love poem
(but i doubt i would do it in months)
keep it up
if you ever want me to read any of your poems
just message me plz
it would be my pleasure
keep writing the god ones
tc
your friend
Rohan

Omg, it brought such a strong picture in my mind, it was just amazing. it was so sweet, i loved it. loved the concept of this piece. 5/5

Someone like the last person.
ii think that line could have been written diffrently. but this poem was a good. 5/5

Well this one was pretty good. I liked it
and the way you explained the person of which you wanted. And the rhyming was great and didnt seem forced

"Now give your hand, and hear my voice.
Pick a love or a life, that is the choice. "

favorite stanza ^^

but i think the last line needs a little more construction

but still a great poem

5/5

Hey u have such a great knack to write wistful love poems.. and i luvv the sing song verses... has an old fashioned ring to them.. uu could do with makin this piece longer ... to explain more of the feelings.. good work..

Nice rhymes and rythm, flowing well, having a crystal clear and a good message. Intended meaning is lucid, having both lexical and poetic qualities. 5/5

Tc

Fsams

Aw, this poem seems very heartfelt. You expressed emotion beautifully in every line. I'm not usually to fond of this structure, but it suits the piece very well. 5/5/

marcella

Wow flow was great and the words so true i think we all question the person we love and the life we should live i dont know but this is very honest in the feeling and emotion 5/5

laura