Beautiful poem
i loved it

I know you love me too,
When I look into your sweet eyes.
You laugh and do your cute little smile.
A smile incapable of lies.

my favourite... a smile incapable of lies.

sooo sweet..... this whole poem reminds me of my bf and i love him so much... i love this poem its brilliant

ur very talented
much love .xx

When you grab my hand to cross the street,
My goosebumps spring to life and show.
With each and every passing moment,
I know that our love grows.
i really liked that stanza.
this poem had a great flow def 5/5
i think though if you keep writing you could become a better writer,
you used strong words and made them fit together nicly done

WOW, i thought this was such a great love poem
it wasnt cliche but it was good and full of great emotions. The rhyming was good and the flow was great as well.

But i think the last line could have
a little retouching done on it

but none the less a great poem

a well deserved

5/5

Hey this was a cute .. different sort of love poem.. something like a first luv . good work :)

Well your poem is exceptionallly good :). I can see your creativitya nd the ability to use metaphors and figurative phrases. But you could change the 12fth line like "I know that our love will grow" then it will be better I feel :)

Any ways the poem is cohesive, creative, descriptive and very beautiful.

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Fsams

This was a beautiful love poem. There was a nice flow and good rhymes as well. Nice job. 5/5

marcella

This was beautiful. I felt so alive and so happy when i read this, it was so well written, and it flowed so well. everything about it was just beautiful.
love Tara-Kayx

'A smile incapable of lies.'
^favorite line.
this poem speaks of true love and I love that. Being in love is the greatest feeling in the world that everyone should have the chance to experience. I loved this poem. It flowed so well.
Your very talented.
5/5
*Brittney

I loved this poem. That's what I have for this poem. xD Haha.

I loved the emotion, flow, and all the above. xD
it was just amazing.

Out of six poems.
I found two mistakes.
I honestly think you're either God or go over your poems about seven times before you put them on xD
Not that it would be bad to do so.

Wonderful job, darling.
I've enjoyed reading, and will continue. xD

keep it up.
5.5