This is one of the greatest poems ever written!!! I love it! Great Job!!!!!

Lovely. && Very true.
"You'll go through a lot in life's journey
You need to suck it up and get by"

^ I love that ending, it sums up the poem perfectly. :P The flow was good && the emotions were strong && clear. && The message was good also. Fantastic job. 5.5 Keep writing.

- Stephyy <3

Keep writing to me you have great potential and within time you will start writing piece that everyone can relate to no matter what age. This was also really good. A great read to me. Don't give up. ~mel

I like it

I love it so much.
It was really good and yet again it proves you are a wonderful writer.
keep it up.
xoxo
--Chelsey

btw. the comment that you left on my extra baggage poem.. your right its a meataphor.. saying that She has alot of problems in her life and she doesn't get help for them, so she has them all hanging on to her.
Does that make sense?
hope so.
xoxo
--Chelsey