This was unusual, but I think I liked this. It was written in it's own dialogue, really. I like how you kept words to a minimum, but a clear pictures was created of the surroundings you were describing.

Nice job.

Unique and the flow is great and fun. The way words strung makes it a cohesive poem. 5/5 all the way

Unique and the flow is great and fun. The way words strung makes it a cohesive poem. 5/5 all the way

Such a succinct depiction of a softball game. The use of certain sounds and actions definitely brought fair justice with this piece. Pretty.

Love softball so i loved the poem love you

Good poem. Very unique and I love how it is different. I already knew you loved softball but I didn't think you'd write a poem about it :P. I loved the onomateopias(sound words like whoosh) in it as well.
Great Job on this. 5/5

-Shannon <3

It was different, I dont see many poems like it.
But it was still good.
yet another pom that proves you have talent.
keep it up.
xoxo
--Chelsey