Love, lost, taken, Gone.

by Serina the Squid   Aug 5, 2007


My cloud of dreams cannot find home
From laughter spent choked up in tears
The rhythm of passion is lost in time
Like petals on the wind that measure years

I live in figments of the mind
Where shattered dreams last just too long
For smoke and fire to take your soul
Don't forget when yesterday's gone

I once felt this so soft and passionate
from fluttered eyes to core of bone
But, bitter sweet, it fell away
and from this birthed my heart of stone

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  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    That was an excellent write. I really like the line
    "For smoke and fire to take your soul"
    It paints a very vivid picture in my head. It makes the poem less predictable and less like other love poems. Great job!

    ~Mo~

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good
    I really enjoyed this poem
    it was real and not to predictable
    nice work your a great writer
    5/5