Awesome. that's not exactly what i want to say but i can't conjure up the words right now...

Wow.. great poem.. i loved it .. the flow was awesome.. pretty sad tho..it sort of somehow,reached it.. truly felt ..

keep it up

~Wake~

It's great, I love the words and rhymes you've used to make it flow so well.

I really like this piece. It is SO filled with emotion and I absolutly love that! I can tell you put alot of yourself into this piece. And i am very glad you did because it def payed off! You have an excellent piece here. Love it! You are very talented...anytime you want me to take a look at your work, just pm me!
Take care,
Loni

That was great.

War rages inside of my dreams,
Waking up to terrified screams.
My heart desperately cries out
Throwing my mind into doubt.

^^this part of the poem shows confusion and fear^^ 5/5

Great poem i really liked this one. keep up the good work ^_^