What I'm Trying to Say

by TrueLover   Aug 5, 2007


Every day, I want to wake up to your face
and watch cartoons until noon,
when really good old movies come on at one a.m.,
I wanna watch them with you
when your brother stops by to visit,
I don't want to hear it when he's gone,
I want to be there right beside you,
to meet his brand-new son;
and if we get hungry
I want to order-in Chinese...
we should cuddle up by candlelight
in bed and watch t.v.
and when I get home from work,
I want home to be with you.
I want to leave the shower with damp hair
and snuggle in your lap
and I want to say goodnight in your arms
instead of on the phone.
What I'm really trying to say
is will you marry me, my dear,
and love our lives away?

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  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Aw thats so cute! I like the last line best..."and love our lives away" thats so sweet! (Ive probably said this before, but I really like how you say things in your own words and dont use cliches.)

    The poem had a steady rhythm. It never got rocky or unsteady at all! Keep it up!!

    ~Morgan~