Well what can i say?..simple and great i know how you feel the emotion is revealed in every lines and it was really sad... your flow is smooth. great job!! Keep it up

This was a short simple and get to the point poem:D
all i can say is good job on this one!
so blunt and straightforward:D
if only some ppl were like that aye ahah

well tk care now
bree

Love is just one of those things, when everything is good it's great but one wrong word or move can change it all forever. 5/5 GG23

....OMG.....I love this. There really is alot of meaning behind it. And I can Relate to it.I love how it was short, but got to the point of what you were talking about. I LOVE IT. 5/5 :)

~Raven

I thought you said you would be true?
Love me till I died, and never make me cry!?
^I don't like this stanza. Every line except ^ that two lines is written excellently. Ending is very effective! First and fourth stanza are my favorite ones. Atmosphere of this piece is great. 5/5

Use of the lexis is good and the structure is also good. Of course there is room for improvement in this piece. I like the flow and the way you have strung the words. keep it up

Wow.. this poem is different from most I have seen from you too, Elaine. It was full of anger, confusion, sadness, pain... A girl confused on whether a guy had just been lying to her, loving another girl, and it's all overwhelming to her. In some ways I can connect to this, but only because I have experienced something similar to this before.

5/5 <3

~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

Simple yet a good write. I love the meaning behind this. The word choice is good and the rhyming wasnt forced. 5/5
Don't you love me enough to fight?
for my love and for my life?
Love these lines ^^
~ Lainey