You do have creative writing skills with a lot
of anger giving and showing great emotion
and they are a bit long for my taste but thats O.K.
Other then a few misspelled words I think
your poems are pretty good.
Dude!!! Job well done and Write On,
Bogie

Great poem and you expressed the emotions fantastically =) Flow was good and all in all I loved it lols 5/5
Rhea

"Some day all be back" - I'll be back

Apart from that minor hiccup, this one was a great poem. It had the anger and hurt coursing through the words and really drew the reader in.
You did a great job on this!
5/5
*Gem*