Once again that last stanza sounds a bit off.
You cast of* the shackles
Off*
Dang it you never do anything wrong so I can never give you a four. :) Now everyone else is going to think you're bribing me because I rate them with so much critisizsm. I hate spelling that word too.

That was completely awesome. I think that she should read this.

Another one of you elegant poems. The theme of the poem is somewhat slow and peaceful. I really like the way you write. Keep it up!