Comments : The Joy

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Hmm I think that last stanza sounds a little off with the and been set free. I don't understand this line: You can it
    Overall I enjoyed the poem though. I'll give it a five because I can't think of a reason to give it any lower. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    This was very good, good wording and good write. wonderful job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vodka

    Wonderful. all it took was one word!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    This was a great poem, I liked how the rhymes were flawless, yet the flow was a bit off on the third stanza, but it was still great. I really enjoyed it, great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like last stanza but flow of rest of this poem is excellent. You described emotions greatly. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    I really adore how you put the words all together. This is another one great poem. I really loved every lines and the sway of flow. Another job well done.