5/5 nice job . sad but i liked the poem alot:)

A well written piece you have here. Flow was smooth, well done. I like the message portrayed in this poem. I have one suggestion though.. Capitalize the I's =)

Keep up the good work
Thanks for the comment.

Beautiful poem.
Very emotional, sad.
Flow is good.
Loved reading it.
Take care

Great poem ,well written and vocabulary was great. very sad write , but as always you did a good job on it, keep it up, your friend Tracy d........5/5

Aw so sad, I bet this poems always gets people thinking though. I bet it makes them think of someone they have lost and wish they haven't. Actually thats what i thought when reading this. I wish i could turn back time and change the past so i could be with someone i still love :P Nice that you can get your poem to make people think and relate to it. Just some missing words are in your poem. I would look back carefully and see if you can find them. Other than that its perfect ^_^ 5/5 Wonderful poem! :)