Wow. wow. wow. And just when I thought I had read your best poem. Lol... it was really really good. I'm guessing you wrote this during a storm, so you really used your creativity and it was so original! I loved the phrase "Rain like daggers"....it was beautiful. The last stanza was really really good too.

THis Poem was incredible. IT was very clear and precise, and it flowed extremely well, I give it three thumbs up, but I need to find a third thumb first. IT was a wonderful piece of work, I could feel the storm coming when I read this.

Lovely. The imagery was...just wonderful. and it flowed perfectly, I'm WOW'd. Seriously, great poem.

Thanks for the coments, Much appreciated.

I love this poem.
i like the way you used daggers to describe the rain.

Simply great. Nice writing!!!