Suddenly Marry

by CompletelyIncomplete   Aug 6, 2007


Suddenly marry
When you are
Loving someone
In a high degree

Suddenly marry
When you are
Needing someone
In a high degree

Suddenly
Love happens and
Then you feel free

Suddenly a feeling came to me
Willingly when he came close to me
Suddenly I felt a sensation
We'd never reach to a separation

Lovingly honey we're meant to be
Willingly baby come close to me
Telling you truth is a temptation
I will always be your salvation

CMPINC 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Like Fsams and Silverkiss said, this poem was very unique. You have a great style and a good use of words to go along with it. The flow was a little choppy, but still likeable.
    Well done,
    Elaine. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Wow! Very unique, I like your style. The flow I rate a 4/5 but I rated your poem 5/5 because the overall poem overlooking minimal breaks in the flow was awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Well CMP it looks unique and the style seems descrete. Thats the best part of it. The word choice is also nice and the rhythm is great. You have had your own style it seems :)

    Tc
    Fsams

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