Simple poem but still great for the emotions were really screaming in every lines.. it was sad and seems hoping to be loved again.. The flow were smooth.. great work.Keep it up!!!

Wow thats sad. very well written i loved the flow this poem catches u of guard its so sad

Wow this is really good very sad but i can relate....sooo much great job 5/5
laura

Wow. evrything you write is so true. u rrly hav a gift. luv tha poem <3

Nice poem

Another fine written piece by you. I think the flow was okay. I really like the message portrayed in this poem, good job. I have a suggestion.. Capitalize the I's and.. try to use more strong words.. like this..

in (cloudy), rainy weather
= Hazy

One more thing ^_^
(Their's) no one (their)
= I think you mean There's 'there is'
= try to change their to 'here'

I can see that you have a potential in writing. You're talented. Keep up the good work!

Aw i like a lot =]