Aww, so sad.
Yet, great rhyming and word choice.
I'm here if you ever need me.
You take care
Your friend
Hebe

This was a god poem i think you could have added more to it or make apart 2 for it but all in all this poem is a 5/5 and well done!

Great poem you wrote this well
i think you could of added more
but yeah it is alright how it is lol
good poem:D:D

Keenan

So sad and beautiful poem Loved the word choice. Hmmm it is 5/5 foe sure :)

Tc

I usually don't like rhyme, i thought however in this instance it worked quite well. There is a bit of cliched rhyme in there, but for the most part I thought your idea's came across clearly. I really like the title and how you fit it into the piece, it is quite unique and gives more depth to the piece because it makes it sound more original and sincere. I liked it :)
-ariana