Very, very well written. A joy to read.

Simply beautiful, I must say that the last line was my favorite. Very well written.

Very deep.
reached out to my heart.
5/5

"surrounded by every nights chirp and call,"
`night's
"they need to reach their destination."
`I didn't get that ... the "need to" in there doesn't seem necessary to me, but I'm a bit slow so ... -.-'
"breathes to calm nerves that"
`breaths
"Once more I fill me lungs with air, but combined"
`my not me .
"My breathe falters and nothing feels right,"
`breath

That was simply beautiful . It has a gentleness to it that I haven't seen in a long while . The ending is definitely my favourite of many I've read . That line is absolutely perfect .

..__MiNDYY

"From the love movies, to short sentences of
eternity I wouldn't have enough time to tell of them
and all the routes of perfection that our time
together was."

I LOVE your style of writing. It is so gentle yet strong at the same time... if that makes any sense at all. :)

All in all... this poem is beautiful.