I don't even think this poem needs a second part.. I find it amazing. I really love the flow and the content. It's something I can relate too. I'm soo adding this to my fav poems ;)

That was fantastic ^_^ I loved how strong the emotions were in this one and the wording and flow were fantastic also ^_^ I totally understand the pain and feeling of worthlessness expressed in this one =p Great job and I can't wait for the next part =) 5/5
Rhea

I love it. It's so dark.

*cries* WOW This is AMAZING. . . . . That is sooo sweet. Is it true? ANd I agree wth Holly Marie Caron. It doesn't need a second part but I can't wait for it. . . *wipes eyes* This was SO beautiful.

Wow amazing poem..i really like it...i think im adding this poem to my favorites...i love it! and i was also wondering if this is true.