Very good! it is very truthful

Wow, I love it.
this, my friend, is a piece of metaphorical genius.
(that sounded corny)

You have written this great wisdom for such a young woman, thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. May you always have peace and joy within your heart.

sadaddy

I really love this poem it actually on of my favorites. 5/5

A WAHEY !

yip.thats what.. a superb piece..no doubt..

and the ending just pulled me back in ..

"..But hatred can't get through without help.."

a great write

keep it up

~Wake~