Wow this was beautiful
nice continuous rhyme
i liked the middle stanza the best
great poem though
5/5

Amazing skill!! i love your poems... well written, awesome rhyming... beautiful "story"... i can relate to this one... very well done hun
<3ang
5/5

First stanza is the greatest. This poem is short but very powerful. Topic is original and it is very easy to read. 5/5

I can relate to this poem A LOT. very very good! 5/5 keep up the work!

BabyGurl

Awesome poem! I loved it! Definalty a 5/5! Keep up the spectacular work!!!