Hold my hand

by xxKarma   Aug 6, 2007


What can you do when
the weight of the world
rests on your shoulders
it crushes you like
a thousand boulders.

what can you do when
the reins of control
have slipped from your hands
it seems like your mind
has lost all comand.

what can you do when
those feelings of sorrow
have a hold of your heart
they cut , they tear
they rip you apart

when hope seems lost
and you drift far from land
just cry on my shoulder
take hold of my hand
ill listen with my heart
and try to understand.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    This peom shows your true self and emotions.
    i voted and gave it an awesome 5/5

    oh and please return the favor. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    A beautifully written piece of poetry! 5/5 the whole thing just flowed together really well!

    xD
    ~NinjaGirl~

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