That was beautiful.

The poem in itself was rather simple, and didn't require a lot of thinking. But it was a -very- nice idea, and I'm sure it will brighten the smile of whomever it was meant for.

Excellent!

it kinda bit of sad! bit its okay. Good right. this one have a different style..

keep on writing!

Aww it made a beautiful little slide show in my mind, am i too mushy? haha maybe a little It was really nice. 5/5

Emza ^.-

Nice work... it's soo beautiful!

It was very sweet and well writtin. Who ever this is for is very lucky.