Hey,
a nice poem, it really made me smile, and thinking of how wonderful friendship is, and how precious real friends are. I like the rhyming and your word choise, good work 5.5
kisses stephanie

Great poem.
A very good rhyming and flow.
And the word choice is great.
It made me smile.
Really enjoyed reading this.
Take care
Your friend
Hebe

Another wonderfully penned written piece Birgit. You're really improving =) I think the flow was smooth, I like the story behind it, good job. Also using the last words as the title is really effective.

5/5

Love this poem :)

ashleigh

Its great.............that senario is what i feel right now....

*little squeal*

One of my favorites by you is this, Birgit! It's absolutely delightful to read. I personally can connect to its substance since I myself have experienced the same situation countless times already. Ah! See? Even your mind gets to tease you a lot. :) The ending part made my heart flutter. It's so cute.

Love,
Marian

Hey I really like this.