I think you were trying to shorten the poem. What made me think you were is because some lines were limited which took the strength of each line, away. But it was nonetheless, a good poem.

Sad! I like how this is, making readers think who or what is that mysterious she. I understood that you where writing about a little girl but upper a reader saying you wrote about fire faces. I can be very wrong:) Also, discriptions were great! Very deep poem.
Keep writing 5/5

Very intense piece. The sadness and dispair cry in this write.

But still she sits in the window
happy to have silence
aware she's got no one
but the wind at her back

This stanza really touched my heart. How many times has this been felt.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Reminds me of a TINDERSTICKS song
in a really wierd way...
and thats a really good thing...

Wow, so professional.
i like it!

Very beautiful... great write...

"aware she's got no one
but the wind at her back "

^^so touching...