Alright job on the poem, some of the rhymes felt forced and the topic was cliche. Keep writing and improving!

Yea i do agree the rhymes were forced but it wasnt a bad piece just work on those rhymes if its hard for you try freeverse you dont rhyme you just spill onto the page in whatever form it takes :)

Yea i do agree the rhymes were forced but it wasnt a bad piece just work on those rhymes if its hard for you try freeverse you dont rhyme you just spill onto the page in whatever form it takes :)

Yea i do agree the rhymes were forced but it wasnt a bad piece just work on those rhymes if its hard for you try freeverse you dont rhyme you just spill onto the page in whatever form it takes :)