I like the anger in it!

Great job with the poem 5/5*

I really like the anger...it was very good. 5/5!

BabyGurl

Love the way you expressed your feelings!

keep it up ;]

♥
Shaina

Really good job
i can really feel the anger in it
great poem

Real friends are hard to come by,they are out there though just don't give up looking.ver emotion filled write.

Wow-this is really carrying alot of emotion!!!!!!!!!

A couple of spelling errors-but im sure you dont want to worry too much about that.

Might be a couple of places where you could have strted a new line-maybe start each point on a new line-i dunno some seem to get loost in each other.

But im still gunna give it 5/5 cos of how strong it is!

Aish