Well as always.. your poems really amazes me. You're talented.

Anyway. I really like your choice of words, I think the flow was flawless and I really like the topic of this poem.. It's good to read something different :)

5/5 as always!

Very Important message. I've always heard the phrase "times goes fast" but I've never realized how fast. Then suddenly when I look back, it's like wow, that was me? Great poem

I love it!!! its so true!!! keep it up!!!

Wow great poem!

'Never stopping to spectate, no time to speculate,'
^ This line is redundant.

I'm not sure I like the "we" tense, I would have preferred a "you." It would have actually made the poem more personal. Also, the idea is great, but the flow is off in some places and the rhymes seem forced. Again, the idea is great, and your after note is a lovely touch.

Karly, sorry for the criticism, but know that it's always constructive :) I love you.

Bye. 5/5

Alright Mr. Senstivo, this poem is great and the flow is SICK. The idea, for the third time, is 'amazing' (for lack of a better word). Good writing. This poem makes me want to make a baby, I mean COLLAB, with you.

This is a dense read. im really not a fan of classic abab and al that jazz, but if the vocabulary is there. im all for it. your flow seems so laid back, where as alot of abab poems you can almost guess the last word of each sentance.

nice work. (sorry it took a while for a responce, i dont get on often)

Tom.

I loved your poem it flows nicely!

I love the Robert Frost poem from which I assume the title was taken (which is cool as titles can't be copyrighted). excellent rhyme scheme and flow. Great imagery/metaphor. But what is most striking about this poem is the aspects of truth in life you've captured just as well as Frost ever could. You write with the wisdom and experience of one well beyond your years. Great piece.

Write On!

Grey Ajurahck

This one caught my eye, with the Robert Frost title. I like the way you modernized the idea, and put it in words of today that people can relate with and understand. Another beautiful poem. ~Tara

What a beautiful poem with a wonderful, sincere message. Nice writing. Honest Luck.

Sarah