Wow! 5/5

I loved it! Good job

Very beautiful poem! 5/5

This poem is so beautiful you are a great writer.

Omg this is so sad but so very beautiful. I love how your wrote it and your word choice was great. Keep writing. And may your heart heal.

XxXKristie MarieXxX

Wow awesome poem
really captured the moment
and made it beautiful
look forward to seeing more
xx

This poems almost made me cry. very good.

This poems tell a lot, a life story, just put in some lines.. Yes, time flies, and it flies fast...Soon this moment we are living will become yesterday, will become past...time will fly and we will be old and wise and looking on this time of youth.. Thinking how we felt about our first love...yeah..it is amazing.. After reading old love letters you can remember how we were in love, how everything happened.. How sad and beautiful is that...

Awww such a sad yet beautiful poem! It really touched me! I liked how it started and ended... because as readers, we find out at the end who you're missing and talking about in the poem... It's so lovely and heartfelt... You really penned your emotions so well. Great job!

" a drop fall into that picture
maybe that was my tear" This was my favourite line in this whole poem :)
Really deep and sincere. I really love the emotions put into this poem. Great job :)