I really liked this poem until it got to the end and you were like "she was dead." I was shocked... I didn't feel the emotion of it because it was so abrupt...

I really like this poem.It was really good.the end really shocked me.great job.

That was amazing. i loved that one also. 5/5

xxMandaxx

ps. u have gr8 talent

Wow...really enjoyed reading this poem and I felt a lot of sympathy for the character. I would have preferred it though if she hadn't died and had instead moved on and shown that guy what he was missing lol But the direction you took for the poem worked well and was written beautifully!