i have never talk to you before. but now i m happy that i found one more talented writer. yeh, i m talking about you.
your poem was amizing. the feelings of first love was great.
you deserve 5/5
keep in touch
hope to talk you soon
A well write very collected peace usually rhyming the first two lines and the the bottom two would make it seemed forced but this technique suits you i especially liked this stanza
I'll love you in this time forever,
Misty skies, won't hold together,
A love lost inside only hearts,
One that only stops and starts.
Great poem! Yay for the non-existent Auzzies! And Nay for the use of zeds in our english spelling! "Realize"
Beautiful rhymes are both lovely and rare on this website, KEEP IT UP! Work on your rhythm consistency and you will be unstoppable! Here's a tip I use if i got too many words,
Write them backwards & omit passing words. Eg:
The sun is so bright in daylight 8syllables
Daylight, the sun so bright 5syllables
I thank you for your kind words on my write. i was impressed by this write. i thought it conveyed emotions very well. it also had a good flow and rhyme. you are a beautiful young lady by your picture. and i wish you all the best. ben thompson
I like your word choice in this poem very much, great imagery is mixed with excellently expressed emotions and that creates superb atmosphere of this piece. It is very original, I don't like few lines but all in all it is really fantastic poem. It isn't classic love poem which is truly refreshing, you showed in this piece that you are really talented. I enjoyed reading it.