This is so touching. Beautifully written, but very sad and heartbreaking. This piece is simple, but so emotional.
Keep up, 5/5 from me.

Very touching. great poem 5 / straight.

I love this poem.
my granddad died almost two years ago. i miss him alot and so i feel like this poem was about me and him. if its okay i'd like to take it with me next time i go visit him. keep writing. you have a great talent.