Wow thats kind of scary. but its indeed, a very nice poem.

Wow thats intense

Wow that was so sad and full of emotions!!! i loved it!

Good job on writing the poem

Yeah!!...great poems......kinda a depress one... suicidal typo... LOL.. ^^, i like your words....realy like them..keep it up!... ^^, and continue the good words of GOD.. ^^,

5/5 aweSome

-bryan

Omg i love it you have no idea how i can relate to that...which prob isnt a good thing...i just love that poem!

WOW i like this one... really a good and brilliant poem... keep up...

Wow. Intense. Deep. Emotion. I could just feel what she felt...great poem!

Wow! this poem was really intense andyou could feel the emotion....love the twist at the ending..makes you really feel what the feelings are like in this poem...awesome work :)

5/5

Wow, that is sad. It is very intense, for a lack of words to put it. I can feel the emotion from it. Very good =D

5/5

Good poem, that would suck, sorry if you've lost someone you cared about that much

The end left a perfect twist on the story portrayed in the poem. The poem was well written and full of emotion.

Great poem...really! i like the way you made your rhymes...
=)

Wow i absolutely loved it! 5/5

hey could you read my poem "mistakes" and tell me what you think?

Holy snacks i really like it ahmazing and wow and yeah i dunno what else to say but this is really good!

Awwwz that is rele sad....but very good written! plz check out some of my poems!

The last line blew me away!!!
YOu add so much freaking emotion and meaing to your poems. I'm addicted. For sure this is a beautiful 5/5

I love this poem girl

Wow amber..good job...that kind of stuff really happened...they finally realize what they lost until after its gone. Great job. Hey check out my new poems "hurt" and "he said". Thanks.

keani lovez koa

REally good, really great story, and i liked the way you did... rhyme, rhyme, blah, rhyme.... But I do believe it could have flowed a bit better:) really goood job otherwise though