Comments : I can't keep pretending that everything is okay...

  • 16 years ago

    by His Firecracker

    Thats really good...i feel like that so much...

  • 16 years ago

    by Brie Anna

    This was an amazing write and i just thought you should know that 5/5 keep it up

    :]

    *~*bee*~*

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    This is so good! wow! it's so heartfelt and deep. the emotion portrayed in here is so real..and i can relate. i think the poem is beautifully writen. i can definitely feel your pain while reading it. great work! keep it up =]
    and thanks for the comment on my poem.
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by Mary

    Good job i loved the poem i can relate to it a lot. Keep up the good work <3

  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really good. i loved it. 5/5

    xxMandaxx