ThatS a wonderfuL writE....yoU deservE foR youR poemS.... welL donE... 5/5

luzaN

WOW a very deep and sad poem wonderfully written and a great choice of words, you seem to have it all placed together so well, a marvelous job and a pleasure to read,,, keep it up ,,,, your friend Tracy d............5/5

Wow it made me cry

Strong written poem, i'm not a big fan of rhyming poems but i can have some adoration for this piece. It's very beautiful and the end is bittersweet sad.
I liked it, and thank you for commenting on one of mine poems it's very much appreciated :)

Take care

xo angelique

5/5