Very nice. 5/5

Heartbreaking. heartaches seem to cause the worst pain than anything else in life. I wish you the best.

--Sher

And youll find a new girl to take my place like I took hers

that line is WICKED!!! omg that was a great poem. i could read it over and over and over again lol 5/5

Your really good at this whole love poem thing... 5/5

For a young age.. u kno how to express ur feelings thru writing.. i wish all girls r lyk that.. =D GREAT JOB!

Beautiful poem! You really know how to write! Love it!

I wasn't to keen on this. it didn't really make me feel any sort of emotion until the very last line. i thought you were holding back a little on this piece. however the end line...i adored that. i found it to have such great power and intensity. awesome ending.

Love this one, another amazing poem! 5/5
xx love