It was so sad and sorrowful nadine
I liked the flow of it

My fave lines are;

stares at those fools laughing on the play ground.
But this body ain't just ready,
for a journey that seems lats till eternity.

Keep it up,
Laura

PS:I'm so honoured that you liked my poems

So effective i love it

I can feel your pain of being alone...i hope you will find much better people that you will never feel alone..
nice poem

Very powerful, with vivid imagery through the whole piece. I can relate to it.
Keep up!

Very deep i would not know bout HS but...
i loved ur poem

Its deep and lots of emotion.
and its really sad.
i liked it heaps.
5/5

xo.louiii

ps. thanks for the comment on mine =]

Gosh, you are so deep. Thats what i love about your writing. good job 5/5

Good poem
It's interesting to see the struggle of the person even in his afterlife.
Yeah highschool can really be a drag sometimes, but keep hanging on just remember one day it will all be over. :)

Take care,

xo angelique

4/5