Amazing bro, u took the words rite out of my mouth ... I lost the one girl I've ever loved and will ever Love .. and yea its not east .. n the feelings of pain are bottomless .. but u capture it well in this poem ... check out some of mine ... and keep ur head up .. for one broken heart to another ... stay strong buddy... keep up the good work .. take care... peace ..
Wow. This poem was really excellent. I felt the emotions as I read it, and the pain as well. This could easily have really happened, or have been thought up from a brilliant mind such as yours. Please keep writing, this was great. 5/5
And if you get a chance please read/comment/vote on some of my works and let me know what you think about my writings. Thanx, and again, keep writing.