There is a few grammer mistakes you can fix.
Please try to listen now
Nothing makes such sound
Peaceful serenity
Digging it from the ground
i really liked that stanza's it was put together very well. this whole poem was beautifully done!

Very good i liked it keep up the good work

This poem is different from the stuff i've read !

good work keep it up !
love
amy

Thats really good
xx

It's wonderful

expressive

Oh thank you very much :)

Well, it is a sylabel poem although it goes from like a few sylables to more and then back down again,

"Please try to listen now
Nothing makes such sound
Peaceful serenity
Digging it from the ground"

I really like the way it flows, but the title seems to cramp the flow slightly.

"Form the beaches again
With thoughts of wind
Holding onto the sand
With small echoing hymns"

Another prime example of awesomeness!
5/5 =D