Wow. i loved this whole piece. i loved the concept of it, the words you use. it was very powerful and had a lot of emotions behind it, it was a delight to read this. great work 5/5

This piece is very short and sweet. Though not very short it really has great meanings and good word choice. Keep it up

Wow..This poem had so much emotion in it..You could just tell that you were trying to get it all out...

I loved this whole thing, It was written so beautifully..

Great Job... 5/5

Pretty good. It felt a little ackward, but I think that's what you were trying to portray. A few grammarical issues, but nothing huge. Good job.

Nice poem...sometimes i feel like that lol...great poem =^^=

It's a nice poem..
keep it up!!
:-)

Short sweet and too the point well done :)