Another fine written piece by you, I think the flow was smooth, good job. I think to improve this.. you should put it into stanzas =)

Nonetheless a good read.
Thanks for the comment!

Its good i like it :P
thanx for the comment, its a good read ill look at some others.
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This was a sad poem in the end i did not expect it well done another 5/5

I reeeaaaally love this one! and alot of us can relate to it! great job!

This is amazing.
well done..
its really good,
xx
libby