That is a very nice poem........

bridget

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'I quaralled you many times,'
I think 'with' should be placed after quaralled.

'I've never thought of your side'
left me sort of confused. Maybe there is a way to reword that to make readers understand exactly what your trying to say there.

overall this is a great poem and I enjoyed reading it!
5/5
*Brittney

Awesome job :)

Great poem! keep it up :))

Good job keep it up!

Thanks for the comments .. I'm from burma so .. may be I'm lil weak at english .. I'll try my best ... anyway thanks

My Dear it not rightwy....

"I said bad words many times"
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