Comments : Nine Reasons

  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Has a nice rhythm to it! It's beautiful! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Very meaningful and i think everyone will read into that differently :)

  • 14 years ago

    by TrueLover

    Kinda sad, but a great poem! Kind of reminds me of me, if I'm understanding the poem right. About uncertainty? That's what I get from it, I'm sorry if that's wrong...Great write.

  • 14 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Very unique poem, especially with the counting of tears. The only fix you can do is watch your spelling. Keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by Jessica

    Your the best thing that ever happened to me
    ^ Should be "you're"

    Awh, I really liked this. I thought it was unique the way you counted the tear dropss. I also liked the way you didn't rhyme it but it still flowed well. The descriptions were good but I think they could be improved with better vocabularyy. The only suggestion I would make would be that maybe you should change the last line. I just felt it was a bit of an anticlimax. I like the bit "with yet another" but then maybe you could think of something other than "a tear stained pillow".. I donno, that was a bit bland to me. 5/5 though, good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    This was a very interesting way to write.
    The emotion and depth were wonderful,
    the flow was actually really good,
    and the reader, is amazed. :]
    Good work! Keep it up.