//* Excellent poem. I loved how in most stanzas lines 1,2 and 3 all rhymed. That's takes a lot of skill.

Keep it up && Take Care!

-Shannon <3

Thank you So Much For Viewing My Poem ! Means A Lot X

Your Welcome

This poem was extremly sad because i hate goodbyes and breakups and plus im goin through a serious breakup right now...only im the one who lost the feelings :(

Dude thats an awesome poem.
^_^
You're really good

Brilliantly penned... 5/5 from me.

Aww another beautiful poem! i love how you word all your poems, you have great talent keep it up 5/5
xx

Your Face; It Doesn't Glow Anymore
Your Love For Me Is Dead For Sure

My fav lines were definitly those.

Once again another amazing write!! The way you write is so beatiful..I'll tell you what you need to do, publish your poems and like get into short horror genre stories you will be amazing at them!!! xxx Much Love From Roxy

Another great poem, it was beautiful and really heartfelt, which is what i love. i like it when the poem comes from your heart and you can feel it. beautiful job, i loved it wonderful

This poem reminds me of myself.....its the way i feel amout my first love....we've broken up but im gonna tell ya that one day i will marry that boy

What a beautifully written piece.

The depth and emotion you portray in this is very well done, the feelings are easily sensed by the reader.

The imagery creates vivid pictures and the flow is good throughout the whole piece.

Beautifully done.

A great piece love. It was full of emotion and a great flow, with wonderful rhymes. I don't really have a favorite stanza, it was all pretty much as good as each other, the plus side is though, I can't find anything I dislike about it.

Brad

This was a great poem and the ryhme scheme was really good. breaks ups r always a pain =/ but this poem was soothing =)