Comments : Journey Within

  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    That's so true, I some what always find that their are always answers around the corner....Good poem, injoyed it

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Excellently written poem, it holds so many emotions.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -Filled with dark emotions
    Of what I left behind
    Memories of joyous laughter
    Face tattooed upon my mind-
    I like the flow and the imagery in this piece a lot.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really enjoyed this piece, It was really deep holding great emotions. The flow was spot on almost chant like, really smooth and didn't falter at all. You wrote a poem which held such truth and i'm sure many people can relate to this no matter how young or how old. A beautiful piece you have here. Loved it alot. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Excellent flow to this write! And I loved the part about answers being just around the corner.

  • 16 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    First off thank you for having me on your favorites, I added you just as well. Your dark pieces are a favorite to me. In your words it just connects many things in my life and it makes me reflect. I wanted to keep reading because it was like a short story of love that went wrong, just as it has in mine a while ago, perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Answers lead to questions and questions lead to answers a never ending cycle nice poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    WOW!!! Incredible poem, atmosphere is powerful and imagery is great. Very original and flow is excellent. You described emotions amazingly. 5/5