It was a good poem, I like the structure of this piece, well done. What I also like was the use of repetition - it was effective. Also adding 'ing' really enhances the flow, good job.

5/5

A very well penned poem. Nice to read. Good job!

Lovely penned, "from the lover to the lover" even though simply, you expressed them within beautiful emotions...Breathtaking!

Great poem it really followes and the emotion potraed in the poem is great 5/5