Comments : Better Late than Never

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Ms Chelsey..... What a beautiful poems you penned here featuring with Angela...flow well within beautiful emotions...Awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Hey Chelz Belz, as I've said many times before, it was a great pleasure to write with you. We always mesh so well together, I never seem to have a problem when writing with you, things just tend to flow from me.... thanks for asking me to collab again and I'll be looking forward to the next one. You know I'm always here, just drop me an email. I love ya girl and we kicked some butt again with this emotional piece. Talk to ya soon. Hugs and love, Ang

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Chelsey you have done another great job on this collab. Very heratfelt. Great job!
    Take Care love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Chelsey you have done another great job on this collab. Very heratfelt. Great job!
    Take Care love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent poem. I almost cried at the beginning because it was extremely sad but the ending was beautiful.

    "Longing for a real home
    Filled with laughter and love
    People who care no matter what
    A family I can truly be a part of"
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    That was my favourite stanza. The flow was amazing and the rhyming was spot on.

    Overall, you two did a wonderful job with this collab.

    && thank you chelsey for the comment.

    Take Care!

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Wonderful collab, Chels. Both of you ladies did terrificly well! It seemed to me to be one of the most touching poems I have read on this site. So poignant are the emotions. Amazing work!
    Marian :)

  • 16 years ago

    by njabulo b

    Its a very nice poem, its touching. keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Libby

    Hey, This is an amazing poem.. this is just the best one i have seen so far. Well done:P
    xx
    libby

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is fantastic, so heart rending.
    you are a talented poet, keep writing.
    take care x.o.x