Excellent poem. Sad but extremely sweet. I love this style as well and it flowed nicely.

Keep it up

-Shannon <3

Really good poem going on favorites
i've felt the same way about people
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A superbly expressed and damn poignant write..

simply awe-some..

keep it up

~Wake~

Aw! i love it!!!

Well done! i really love this poem. I feel the same way about my boyfriend, i truely feel that life wouldn't be worth it really without him and i couldn't imagine life without him! Great job!

Would you mid if i showed this to my ex? I find it verry true for me. I like it. 5/5

I love this poem....i can really realate to it....check some of mine out some time

I really like this one! The whole time I read it I was thinking of my boyfriend. Sometimes it is so hard to write what you really feel but if I lost him this would come pretty close I think. :-)