That was great ^_^ Short but really great with fantastic expression of emotions and great wording =) 5/5
Rhiannon

Deep and intense emotions.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy

ItS sO much fascinatinG...

luzaN

ItS lovelY & aN interestinG writinG....

luzaN

ItS lovelY & aN interestinG writinG....

luzaN

Wow that w powerfull work kep it up and i say no more

Beautiful..deep intenions..

It's lovely. Perfect length and well described.

This is a truely amazing poem

keep up the great work :) 5/5

Absolutely beautiful! you speak of truth...thats what i like ;)