Thats sweet

This poem is really good except i dont really like how you use "you" alot. you can find ways of saying things without using "you" all the time.

Aww seriously give it to her.

a suggestion mite be instead of making your knees weak, try something like "you make my heart skip a beat" maybe? idk its catchy in my eyes. she'll love it =]] any gurl would <3

Very nice.

Aww that was sooo sweat i liked how you wrote that very romantical i really liked it 5/5

Luv it
its just tooooo cute lol